Thursday 4 September 2014

But I am afraid it’s the last one by Braden


I tried to call the cops but they did not answer. “I should of told you that he cut the power,” he said in a scared voice. I go in to the fridge and grab anything that looks hard, so I grab milk, eggs and expired cheese. The man with the dark red hat started chopping down the door viscously, we told the old man to run and hide so we could think of a plan. The man with the dark red hat chopped down the door and grabbed our hands, so I grabbed a knife and cut him.

1 comment:

  1. Well done Braden. A fantastic first 100WC of the year with lots of super description. I wonder what would happen next if you were to continue this story.

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