Tuesday 14 October 2014
The big day at the park by Isaac
One day we went for a drive and my sister kept saying
are we there yet I cant what till we get to the park. I bring my dog to play
with at the park. On the way we drove past a big building and my sister said
what is that smell she said it was the dog but it was a sewer place. And
everyone said in my family I could not believe the
smell we had an amazing day at the park we played for two hours there was a big
slide
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Hi Isaac,
ReplyDeleteI must agree with you, the sewer is not a pleasant smell at all. It's wonderful that you shared your writing with us in the 100WC. Don't forget to give the reader (me) a chance to take a breath by using proper punctuation (periods, commas). Keep writing! I can't wait for next week's prompt. Are you excited?
Mrs. Hanna (Team 100WC)